“They said you could be anything Anything but at the top . . .”
That last stanza is just *chef's kiss* good. Love it
Thank you!
Coulda, shoulda, woulda.
Perhaps I should've been a bug. Alas, I came out as a man, so as a man I must live.
(Or as three goblins in a trench coat. That's pretty close, too.)
Three goblins in a trench coat is arguably better than three orcs. Just saying.
Dude. Bleak!
The voice that says you should have been a bug is the ENEMY.
Don't lose sight of that.
Yes exactly. You get the point of this one. Not surprised that you do.
A voice to counter the voice that says you are a bug!
https://substack.com/@contarini1/note/c-85015804?r=9sy97&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action
Yes! The ONLY antidote to this world.
The comma after "bug" on the last stanza did it for me. Not really a poetry guy, but this was nice.
I’m glad you enjoyed it man. Thank you.
I thought you were quitting substack?
That last stanza is just *chef's kiss* good. Love it
Thank you!
Coulda, shoulda, woulda.
Perhaps I should've been a bug. Alas, I came out as a man, so as a man I must live.
(Or as three goblins in a trench coat. That's pretty close, too.)
Three goblins in a trench coat is arguably better than three orcs. Just saying.
Dude. Bleak!
The voice that says you should have been a bug is the ENEMY.
Don't lose sight of that.
Yes exactly. You get the point of this one. Not surprised that you do.
A voice to counter the voice that says you are a bug!
https://substack.com/@contarini1/note/c-85015804?r=9sy97&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action
Yes! The ONLY antidote to this world.
The comma after "bug" on the last stanza did it for me. Not really a poetry guy, but this was nice.
I’m glad you enjoyed it man. Thank you.
I thought you were quitting substack?