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This was a fun read. Kinda reminds of Christmas vacation and the interplay between Clark and his boss. This Alexander fella needs a cousin Eddie to kidnap the boss so he can put him in his place! Verbally, of course. No murder necessary.

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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it. National Lampoon is an unexpected comparison, but I’ll take it!

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You’re welcome champ😉

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Oh, you’re good. You’re good.

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"Falling Down"-adjacent. I really like the prose in this one.

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Thanks Lisa! I know writing in the second-person is pretty pretentious, but I like to think I had a reasons for it (the narrator’s dissociation from himself).

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"That's why I say 'Hey, man, nice shot.'"

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A+ reference.

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Since I write from a girls perspective (it’s all I got to work with), it was such a wild ride to take a trip like this. Captivating shit.

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Thank you!

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“Turkish smile”

He deserved it

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Haha! That’s kind of an obscure reference. I learned from a family member who lives in London that Turkey is a popular destination for people to go get dental implants. Also, hair implants.

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More reasons why I wouldn't want to live in a city.

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